Paragraph Coherence

A coherent paragraph develops one controlling move through an order and set of connections the reader can follow.

连贯段落围绕一个明确任务展开,并用读者能跟随的顺序与关系组织句子。

Two Tests

  • Unity: Does every sentence serve the paragraph’s controlling purpose?
  • Coherence: Can the reader understand why each sentence follows the previous one?

A sentence may be relevant to the overall essay but still belong in another paragraph. Topic changes, reasoning-stage changes, or a new question often justify a paragraph break.

Practical Audit

  1. Write one sentence describing what the paragraph does.
  2. Label each sentence as claim, evidence, warrant, transition, or context.
  3. Move or remove sentences that do not serve the stated function.
  4. Check whether information order follows the reader’s active question.
  5. Add only the context or transition needed to make the relationship visible.

Connections